My Poem: I Wonder If You Know

[Guest]

I wonder if you know
How much of my world
You hold in your hands;
That the light in my eyes,
Is cause of you?
I can't stop thinking
Of the way you move;
How I felt when your lips,
Touched upon mine.
Your golden shadow
Overclouds my sight,
Forcing me to stay
Instead of leaving,
Living in fear.


**NOTE** This one was written while dating my first love, so it's basically dealing with Teenage love. hehe

 

[southernlady]

I wondered if it was written with someone in mind. Liz

 

[Dave~]

Nice writing!

Dave :D

 

[Guest]

Good Job, with the poem. I like it.